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Комментарий к Home Page En / Doc / Programm Manual / intro, отправлен Maxim Lysenko в 2012-05-23 11:54:00

The comment for Carl.
First of all try not to break formatting on the editing wiki page. Here is the formatting manual http://wackowiki.org/Doc/English .
1. 'as well as other related operations' - maybe the correct version is 'as well as for other related operations'?
2. 'for the development and use of selected operating system Linux' - maybe the correct version is 'for the development and use of the Linux operating system is selected'?
3. 'embedded systems' - maybe the correct version is 'at embedded systems' ?
4. 'while highly skilled user and free' - maybe the correct version is 'while for highly skilled user its also free of charge' ?
5. 'OS Linux is actively developing many enthusiasts ' - maybe the correct version is 'OS Linux is actively developing by many enthusiasts' ?
6. 'that in the future and plan' - maybe the correct version is 'that will be in the future and is planned' ?
7. 'and to combine these functions into one program' - maybe the correct version is 'and can combine these functions into one program' ?
8. 'as well as valuable time programmers' - maybe the correct version is 'as well as valuable time of programmers' ?
9. 'Server configuration system designed' - maybe the correct version is 'Server configurations of the system are designed' ?
10. 'connecting the core OpenSCADA' - maybe the correct version is 'connecting the core of OpenSCADA' ?


 
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